weird crop.. youneed to brop more aboove at her waist or show the leggs, you can't crop off like that, she looks missing appendages. everything from gher top of the skin starts on the chest to the armas and face is a great start, fine tweaking is need a mit, like putting the elbow closer toghet and furhter away from the face a few in ches to get rid of that weir shados on the right side of her face.

Also, yould have photoshopped the wrinkles in her armmpits, and the neck 'point' jutting out down to her chest. Her face sould be the subject, the falloff subject should be the background - just to tye everything in.

plus you can see the Pins that are holding her dress toether right there on the side... and hair pieces are sticking to her back. again a little distracting.

Great idea - great toughts... just need some major fixing and you could have a killer shot.


again, id crop from the top of the blouse up, since it is just a messy wrinkly shirt with stick pins or safetly pins holding her together. She is a lovely girl thouhg!!!!

(do you mind me tell you this stuff? Thisi s what it is for (for critiquing, right?)

if you want my help - let me know!